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Friday, October 25, 2019

45 min writing

       Sometimes strange things happen in this house on Maple street, Archer, Sophie and their mum, Dad are traumatised to death of so much activity happening in it, Archer could hear a faint, amusing sound around his back.
8:00 am, as Sophie woke up with a confusion and whispered, “devils are seeking towards me.” Mum is always  vigilant, Archer and Sophie called Dad a “trilogy master” because he sometimes scare them, also tells jittering stories to them at early dawn.


“I can smell a hint of smoke in the kitchen, Mum, is the oven burning? Suspicious Archer, “ Mums not even baking and I don’t smell any smoke in here!” shouted Mum, Archer slowly smell more smoke.
Smoke is breaking into the house like water flooding into buildings, “ Quick! We need to get out of the house right now! Screamed Archer as he zoomed out of the house, Sophie was hopeless, Mum and Dad were hugging on each other tightly.
After the smoke evaporated from the air, Mum and Dad couldn’t find Archer anywhere inside the house, “archer!” cried Mum, Suddenly they found Archer lying on the surface of the smoke and said his last words, “ It was a perfect lift of.”

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