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Tuesday, March 3, 2020
My strange Sestina
Hey Bloggers, this is my Sestina for NZ writing, we will be sending these to a school in Hamilton we are looking forward to reading theirs, this is my one.
Fruity Dreams
I saw the juicy peach oozing,
As it reminded me golden syrup.
People gathering here to watch me.
Fruits blasting out pulps and seeds.
My heart are sweet like strawberries.
So it feels like I'm sugary.
I hope you like it and what do you think about it?
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